Wednesday, 30 December 2015

story - 7 hours
November 1, 2011 at 6:06pm
delhi ki ek ativyast sadak par ek durghatna yani accident ho jata hai . logo ko pass ke hi ek hospital me bharti karwaya jata hai . accident huye logo ki halat najuk thi . kuch to koma me they , kuch marne wale they aur kuch mar chuke they .
operation theatre se bahar nikla ek naujawan doctor , jo ek patient ke parijano se kuich kah raha tha .
DR. - is bheeshan accident me apke ladke ke sir me bahut hi gahri chot aai hai , jiski wajah se khoon behisab bah raha hai , hame fauran operation karna hoga , ap counter par ja kar forum bhar digiye aur 10 lakh rupaye jama karwa digiye
PATIENT'S FATHER - 10 lakh rupaye ... itne rupaye hum kaha se layenge ?
DR. - iske bare me sochna apka kaam hai , jaldi kijiye apke bete ke paas sirf 7 ghante hai .
7 HOURS LEFT -
doctor ka itna kahna hi tha ki parijano me bhoochal aa gaya , koi ro raha tha to koi dusre ko dilasa de raha tha , koi uppar wale ko dosh de raha tha , to koi khud ko doshi maan raha tha.
PATIENT'S MOTHER - agar maine aaj usey coaching na jane diya hota , to shayad aisa nahi hota , mera dil aaj bar - bar kah raha tha ki kahi kuch anhony hone wali hai , aur wo ho hi gai ab mai kya karu (dher sara rona)
PATIENT'S SISTER - pata nahi kyu aaj bhaiya bhi subah se yahi kah rah they ki aj unka man nahi hai kahi jane ka , phir coaching se ph. aaya aur wo chale gaye , kash mujhe pata hota ki unke sath aisa hone wala hai to mai unhe kabhi jane nahi deti.
PATIENT'S GRAND MOTHER - mujhe to yakken hi nahi ho raha hai ki hamara ladka operation theatre me hai , abhi aj subah hi to kitna kushi - kushi hamse mila tha.
FLASH BACK
SOME HOURS AGO -
morning - 6 : 30 am
aman - mom kaha ho ?? jaldi nashta do der ho rahi hai.
mom - kya baat hai beta aaj badi jaldi uth gaye ? kisi se milne jana hai kya ?
(mom aman se baat karne ke sath - sath uske liye nashta bana rahi hai ... aman dinning table par nashte ka intezar kar raha hai)
aman - offo mom ap bhi na .. lagta hai bhool gai .. aj mera audition hai singing ka dophar 3 baje se.
mom - mujhe achhe se yad hai bete , par itni subah kaha ja rahe ho ?
aman - apne dost shubham ke paas ja raha hu mom, practise ke liye .
(mom aman ke liye nashta laga deti hai .. aur aman khane hi ja raha tha tabhi aman ke papa .. apne kamre se bahar nikle aur aman ko dekhte hi puch baithe)
father - aman ! aj tum badi jaldi uth gaye ? practice ke liye ja rahe ho kya ?
aman - ya dad .. i am going shubham home for singing practice, because
father - your audition today 3 pm am i right ?
aman - ya dad you are absolutely right .
(aman lunch karne ke sath - sath father se baat bhi karta ja raha hai.
father - ok son take care yourself & ha aaj aisa gana ki cha jao .. all the best
mom - ruko beta arti kar deti hu phir jao .. 
aman - rahne do na mom ,mai kaun sa jaung ladne ja raha hu , i am going only for practice
(mom aarti ki thali lekar aa rahi hoti hai itne me aman ji bhag nikle)
aman - bye mom , i have to go right now , i talk u later mom
mom - arey sunn to -- uff bada sharati bachha hai , aarti tak nahi karne di , bhagwan is nalayak ko thodi si akal de dena aur iska khyal bhki rakhna
(tabhi aai tez hawa se arti ka dia bujh gaya , aur diye ke bujhte hi maa ke dil me huk si hui uska dil ek anjane bhaye se bhar gaya)
usey chinta satane lagi apne bachhe ki , usne apne pati se kaha )
mom - sunte ho ji .. diya bujh gaya mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai ki kahi mere bachhe ko kuch ho na jaye ..
father - are tum khamakha chinta karti ho , kuch nahi hoga ladka jaldi hi wapas aa jayega.
(mana ghar se bahar nikal te hi apni pulsar180 ko lekar nikal gaya ... apne dost shubham ke ghar , aman ne apni gadi ko ek gharf ke bahar khadi ki , mirror par apne shakal ko dekha , hair par hath fairaya aur darwaje ki aur badha , usne bell key ko press kiya , andar ghar me ring hua , aur andar se aawaz aai ek budhi mahila ki,)
GRAND MOTHER - kaun hai bahar ?
aman - mai hu dadi , aman darwaja kholiye
grand mother - acha ruko kholti hu
(grand mother ne kisi ko awaj di )
GRAND MOTHER - shivani jara gate to kholna , aman aya hua hai
aman - acha aunty
(shivani grand mother ke yaha as a paying guest rahti hai , dadi aur shivani ek ghar me unke alawa koi nahi , dadi ke husband ek accident me khatam ho gaye they wo bhi tab jab aman ke dad sirf 15 saal ke they ,unki maa ne unhe padhaya likhaya , kabil banaya , shadi karwai , shadi kar ke aman ke dad apne ghar me chale gaye aur aman ki dadi yahi rah gai , bad me unhone ek paying guest rakh liya taki unka man bhi laga rahe , )
(shivani ne lapak kar gate khola aur aman ko bahar khada dekh kar khush hui aur bahar khade hokar dono hi baat karne lage .. kuch der tak dadi ne to bardasht kiya phir achanak wo bol uthi .. 
GRAND MOTHER - ya tu mujhse milne aaya hai  shivani se ??
aman - sorry dadi mai to bat me hi laga rah gaya .. waise mai ap dono se milne aya tha
GRAND MOTHER - par mujhe ab tujh par shak ho raha hai .. aman ki to yaha mujhse milne nahi shivani se milne aata hai
aman - aisi bat nahi hai dadi ..  wo to aise hi bato - bato me dhyan bat gaya tha .. aur waise bhi shivani ki parents to koi hai nahi isliye mai usse bhi mil leta hu
shivani - mujhe par ehsaan karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai .
aman - nahi mai ehsaan nahi kar raha hu ... mai to .. 
shivani - chup.. ab dobara mujhse mat milna , mai tumhari shaka tak nahi dekhna chahti hu
aman - arey yar aisa mat kaho .. dadi iska mud kharab ho gaya hai .. mai isey bahar ghuma kar lata hu
shivani - mujhe nahi jana tere jaise langur ke sath
(aur shivani wapas apne kamre me chali gai.. aman aur dadi kuch bhi na kah paye .. 2 min ki chuppi ke baad-)
aman - mai chalta hu dadi .. mujhe bahut kaam hai , mujhe shubham ke ghar jana hai .. apna khayal rakhna dadi
(itna kah kar aman dadi ke ghar se bahar aa gaya , ek baar palat kar ghar ki ore dekha aur phir wapas bike par baith kar chala gaya ....
shayad hamesha ke liye .....)
PRESENT TIME -
aman ke father paise ka intejam karne rishtedaro ke paas gaye , hospital me operation theatre me prateek bed par leta hua hai .. bahar prateek ke mom , sister , dadi , shivani .. bahar baith kar aman ke father ka aane ka intejar kar rahe hai ..
prateek kaun - prateek aman ke father ke first wife ka beta ,, jab prateek 3 saal ka tha tab uski maa ka cancer se intekal ho gaya .. prateek ke liye unhone dusri shadi nahi ki par dadi ke aage unki ek na chali .. aur unhe dobara shadi karni padi jinse do santane hui .. aman aur  swati 
aman ki mom tino bachho ke sath ek sa pyar karti hai .. aur yahi wajah hai ki prateek ke liye wo chintit hai .. aman bhi subah se gayab hai kaha hai koi nahi janta ..
6 HOURS LEFT
FLASHBACK
to be continue..............................

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